edit paper 4

Please edit on my paper I will be sending and re-write the correct way order of dialogue .

Keep my words just change to look correct a dialogue . Need the 2 characters to discuss the idea “conersation”

Delete the repeat sentences and paraphrase them well.

Please focus well while editing the paper to look good on both 1: Cohesion – so readers understand the writing without going out pf points

Stick ideas together and quotes in the right place. 2: Organization + persuasiveness ; not repeat same ideas, change to better

I have attached the ones would help to take and use ideas from. as well u accept i will be able to send the paper be editing.