i will attached the first draft and comments of my professor’s comments.
Second Draftâ€”General Information â€¢ In the second draft, you should make any necessary revisions to your Introduction section and add the literature review sections (of your relevant sub-disciplines) to your research paper. â€¢ You should strive to put all content in your second draft in your own words and cite appropriately. Use quotations sparingly, and, when quoting, be sure to use quotation marks and provide page numbers. Keeping plagiarism out of your draft is an important step in keeping it out of your final paper. â€¢ Remember that slow and steady wins the race. Be sure to schedule regular times to write and hold yourself to keeping this schedule. Format of Second Draft (+ Tips) â€¢ Include Title Page, Revised Introduction, Literature Review Section (of sub-discipline A, subdiscipline B, and the integration of A and B), and References. â€¢ Write at least 10-12 pages (of text), which is about 3600 words, and include at least 10-12 sources. â€¢ Follow APA Style and avoid ALL forms of plagiarism. â€¢ Follow these guidelines carefully. Content of Second Draft â€“ Literature Review Section â€¢ In the literature review section of your second draft, you will review, critique, and integrate the scholarly source material in your two sub-discipline areas. Note that what follows is a suggested structure for this section of your paper. You may find that a different structure works better for your material. Feel free to discuss this further with me in person. o Sub-Discipline A A. Review relevant literature in sub-discipline A (use a thematic structure, rather than an article-by-article structure). B. Define relevant terms (where appropriate). C. Critique literature in this section (as you are discussing it). D. Summarize main themes in this section. o Sub-Discipline B A. Review relevant literature in sub-discipline B (use a thematic structure, rather than an article-by-article structure). B. Define relevant terms (where appropriate). C. Critique literature in this section (as you are discussing it). D. Summarize main themes in this section. o Integration of Sub-Disciplines A and B A. Discuss the themes that emerge (what you have learned) from examining the material from A and B together. Focus on the themes that are most relevant to the proposal section of your paper (i.e., to your proposed social program or applied research project). You will add the proposal section in your third draft. B. Describe any inconsistencies and gaps in the two literatures, using this to make a case for the uniqueness/necessity of your proposed social program or applied research project.